Screeplay Update

So, I heard back from Paul. Whew. Good stuff, though. Thinking, thinking, thinking... We're talking later this week. His notes seem geared to fleshing out and honing in. I'm calling it "color commentary" - you know, there's the football announcer that calls the plays, and then there's his colleague who gives you the back story. We need more back story. We need some more John Madden (famous color analyst - and really my favorite announcer of all time, but hmmm, his style would be a little rough... can't be more Al Michaels that we need, since he does play-by-play... I like Greg Gumbel, but I guess he's play-by-play too...)

I'll have to come up with my own color analyst style. We'll see how that goes.